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by Jameschick
review by Othercat

Rated R; Post-S6

Mmmmmmm photomanip *Blink* What was I gonna say? Oh yeah, story.

Strong opening lines to the story, but it wavers when it gets to the depiction of the relationship she's created between Spike and Xander.

This is an interesting story-part which would probably benefit from more detail, and more of a explanation of what leads *up* to the scene. For instance, the writer could have told us exactly *how* Spike managed to talk Xander into going through with this little encounter.

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